Crossing A City Highway
Title-
I predict that this poem will be about someone or something crossing
a city highway and its adventure while crossing.
a city highway and its adventure while crossing.
Paraphrase-
1. The city at 3 a.m. is an ungodly mask
the approaching day hides behind
& from, the coyote nosing forth,
the muscles of something ahead,
It is 3 a.m and the author is describing the city. The next day is coming
quickly.The coyote is coming forth and sees something.
quickly.The coyote is coming forth and sees something.
2. & a fiery blaze of eighteen-wheelers
zoom out of the curved night trees,
along the rim of absolute chance.
A question hangs in the oily air.
The eighteen-wheeler trucks are traveling along the highway passing
the trees. There is only one question.
the trees. There is only one question.
3. She knows he will follow her scent
left in the poisoned grass & buzz
of chainsaws, if he can unweave
a circle of traps around the subdivision.
It's a habit for coyotes to use their scent to find something or to get back
to where they came from. The author describes the grass as poisoned.
She is now in a neighborhood.
to where they came from. The author describes the grass as poisoned.
She is now in a neighborhood.
4. For a breathy moment, she stops
on the world’s edge, & then quick as that
masters the stars & again slips the noose
& darts straight between sedans & SUVs.
For a minute she stops. Then after that she starts back on her journey
on the highway between trucks and cars.
on the highway between trucks and cars.
5. Don’t try to hide from her kind of blues
or the dead nomads who walked trails
now paved by wanderlust, an epoch
somewhere between tamed & wild.
Don’t hide. Wanderlust- need to travel. Epoch- a period in history.
6. If it were Monday instead of Sunday
the outcome may be different,
but she’s now in Central Park
searching for a Seneca village
The outcomes portrays the day of the week. The coyote is now in Central
Park searching.
Park searching.
7. among painted stones & shrubs,
where she’s never been, & lucky
she hasn’t forgotten how to jig
& kill her way home.
The author expresses the scenery that the coyote is new to. Even though
he has taken this journey, she does not forget where she comes from.
he has taken this journey, she does not forget where she comes from.
Connotation-
In the second stanza, the author uses the word fiery blaze in a positive
and meaningful way. He is describing the eighteen wheelers as powerful.
The author also uses the word poisoned in stanza 2 in a negative way
describe the air outside. He uses the word wanderlust in stanza 5 in a
positive way to elaborate on the “journey” the coyote is having; where
she has a strong desire to travel.
and meaningful way. He is describing the eighteen wheelers as powerful.
The author also uses the word poisoned in stanza 2 in a negative way
describe the air outside. He uses the word wanderlust in stanza 5 in a
positive way to elaborate on the “journey” the coyote is having; where
she has a strong desire to travel.
Attitude-
The author is making the coyote very assertive; very strong willed. The
author’s attitude is very awestruck as he speaks on the journey the
coyote takes.
author’s attitude is very awestruck as he speaks on the journey the
coyote takes.
Shifts-
The first shift in the poem would be from the first stanza to the second.
The author’s choice in the use of the words “fiery blaze” shifts the poem
from metrical and lyrical to a very expressive tone. The last shift would
be from the sixth to the seventh stanza. The author still has the
expressive and relaxed tone in the sixth. In the seventh stanza, he
switches form that to relaxed and calm and symbolic.
The author’s choice in the use of the words “fiery blaze” shifts the poem
from metrical and lyrical to a very expressive tone. The last shift would
be from the sixth to the seventh stanza. The author still has the
expressive and relaxed tone in the sixth. In the seventh stanza, he
switches form that to relaxed and calm and symbolic.
Title- Poetics
Poetics was a good title for this poem. It doesn’t talk about any poetry,
but what the author does is uses poetics. He has metrical and lyrical
aspects, expressive details, and the poem is symbolic. Yusef
Komunyakaa used this poem to be elegiac , not to tell a story.
but what the author does is uses poetics. He has metrical and lyrical
aspects, expressive details, and the poem is symbolic. Yusef
Komunyakaa used this poem to be elegiac , not to tell a story.
Theme-
I feel that this poem is about your journey and at the end of your
journey finding your way home.
journey finding your way home.
I like the way you analyzed the poem and interpreted it in your own words. I get the sense that you truly understand the poem and took your time with this. One thing I can say could be better is the theme. I feel it is very bland and you could elaborate on it more and it could be stronger. Overall good though.
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